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Hooked from sentence 1! Really loved: "My legs feel like they’re only there in spirit, like they wanted to be there but had other engagements, and instead sent gravity in its place"

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Thanks, man. And thanks for reading.

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Starts off like a JAMES KELMAN joint, particularly, HOW LATE IT WAS ..... riteous flow/gits inside the brain for the drain.

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Thank you. I need to check out Kelman - haven't read him yet but just ordered a couple of his books from the library.

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Starts off with a bang, or a kick, I suppose, and with no plot at all really, fleshes out the MC with rich inner dialogue. It’s certainly an interesting piece! Thanks for sharing!

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Thanks for reading!

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This story makes me want more! It also made me thirsty.

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