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Jeanne S's avatar

This is fucking hilarious!

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Ika Wright's avatar

This is a very funny story set upon a very strange premise. I suffer from too vivid an imagination that I felt like covering my nose when reading this halfway through.

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Peter Smetanick's avatar

I enjoyed this tremendously Ray...of course it's funny, but loved the quick character work found within. Looking forward to reading more.

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Ray Downs's avatar

Thanks! It was fun playing with the characters.

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Claudia Befu's avatar

This was great!

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Caroline Osella's avatar

Magnificent tale

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Alan Devincentis's avatar

You did it again!

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Ray Downs's avatar

Have to!

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Jonathon's avatar

It was a bomb waiting to go off haha.

Seriously, your writing is amazing.

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Ray Downs's avatar

Thank you for reading a story about a fart.

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Jonah Ogilwy's avatar

Great idea, could use a better ending.

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