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This is fucking hilarious!

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This is a very funny story set upon a very strange premise. I suffer from too vivid an imagination that I felt like covering my nose when reading this halfway through.

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I enjoyed this tremendously Ray...of course it's funny, but loved the quick character work found within. Looking forward to reading more.

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Thanks! It was fun playing with the characters.

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This was great!

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Magnificent tale

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You did it again!

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Have to!

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It was a bomb waiting to go off haha.

Seriously, your writing is amazing.

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Thank you for reading a story about a fart.

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Great idea, could use a better ending.

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