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Trevor Decker's avatar

Sssssso gooooood! I love the use of therapy-session length internal monologue in a scene with an actual run time of maybe 30-45 seconds. Reminds me of the best stories that adults/big kids would tell about embarrassing moments from their childhood when I was a kid.

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Ray Downs's avatar

That was definitely the idea. Thanks for reading!

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Pages After Dark's avatar

I like your writing style! Keep writing, fellow writer!

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Ray Downs's avatar

Thank you!

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