Hilarious, Ray. Especially the Stockholm Syndrome observation/crack. Also, very candid and natural -- a kind of balancing act of flow, observation, distance, disclosure, analysis (all ingredients for good comedy imo) that echo or mirror the precarious balancing act of the content roiling, boiling, recoiling and in this case >> soiling at the center of the story. Fun piece! A piece of the NON action, as it were. OK. Adieux.
Hey Ray, I really enjoyed this piece...love your humor of course, but this is also very relatable. I'm writing through my marriage at the moment...kinda. Still trying to figure out why we were together so long. Can't say it was a cheap apartment that kept us together...I'll have to dive in further to the complexities. Anyways, this short seemed to pop up at the right time for me. Gave me some food for thought. Thanks, looking forward to more.
Hilarious, Ray. Especially the Stockholm Syndrome observation/crack. Also, very candid and natural -- a kind of balancing act of flow, observation, distance, disclosure, analysis (all ingredients for good comedy imo) that echo or mirror the precarious balancing act of the content roiling, boiling, recoiling and in this case >> soiling at the center of the story. Fun piece! A piece of the NON action, as it were. OK. Adieux.
Thank you. This was kind of a sketch for something else I'm working on. But I thought it could be a fun short, too.
Hey Ray, I really enjoyed this piece...love your humor of course, but this is also very relatable. I'm writing through my marriage at the moment...kinda. Still trying to figure out why we were together so long. Can't say it was a cheap apartment that kept us together...I'll have to dive in further to the complexities. Anyways, this short seemed to pop up at the right time for me. Gave me some food for thought. Thanks, looking forward to more.