This is great, Ray. Love your stuff. Sticky and Dark. Hope your back feels better, sounds like you should hit the jacuzzi and let the jets do their work.
Your mind is a pretty dark place, Ray. Love the ending though! And the middle. And the beginning. Sorry to hear about your back. Hope it comes good soon.
i like the examination of action and effect. tense. you catch the sweatiness. but im not rooting for your guy in the end despite also wanting those others to get it. i mean...hes an accountant for a start...
someone did try to take my fan at an outdoor bar patio when my wife was in the bathroom. I took it back and the people at the table glared at me. Always wanted to make a story with that in it.
This is great, Ray. Love your stuff. Sticky and Dark. Hope your back feels better, sounds like you should hit the jacuzzi and let the jets do their work.
That’s actually not a bad idea.
Your mind is a pretty dark place, Ray. Love the ending though! And the middle. And the beginning. Sorry to hear about your back. Hope it comes good soon.
Thank you!
It’s getting better (I think)
Havent finished reading yet but he strangles them with the fan cable, right? Right?
He yanks off the fan blade and decapitates the guy on Substack live and gets tons of subs
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Hope your back improves quickly.
Me too!
Love the ending. Good job, Ray
i like the examination of action and effect. tense. you catch the sweatiness. but im not rooting for your guy in the end despite also wanting those others to get it. i mean...hes an accountant for a start...
I get it. He’s not a good guy.
Did something like this happen to you? I loved the story!
someone did try to take my fan at an outdoor bar patio when my wife was in the bathroom. I took it back and the people at the table glared at me. Always wanted to make a story with that in it.
I remember you saying that people in Miami were just as rude as people in NY.
Havent finished reading yet but he strangles them with the fan cable, right? Right?