I Say When to Stop

[Will Boucher]

At the beginning of this I identified with the father because I too am an obsessive lover of cheese. By the end of the story, I want nothing to do with this man. Loved the transformation.

[Ray Downs]

I think if I go back to work on this, I'll make Joe more sympathetic. Try to see how much sympathy I can draw out of a snapshot situation like this.

[Will Boucher]

Cheese is the gateway to sympathy

[petrichor]

grateway

[Sudana Krasniqi]

lol I came here to say the same

[Ray Downs]

Give Joe a chance.

[Silvio Castelletti]

You're a genius. Nothing else to add.

PS: No parmesan on the marinara. That's a rule. :)

[Ray Downs]

Thanks! Even though you're wrong about no parm on red. Is that a thing?

[Silvio Castelletti]

it's probably worse than having a cappuccino in the afternoon.

[Ray Downs]

Even iced?

[Silvio Castelletti]

At normal Italian cafes you'd have iced coffee, not iced cappuccino. Maybe at Starbucks you can have something like that.

[Hyun Woo Kim]

This is sad.

[Ray Downs]

I was trying to be kinda funny!

[Anna Schott]

Just gonna go ahead and say it: Joe is my hero. NOW WHERE'S MY PEPPER

[Ray Downs]

Real ones know.

[David Perlmutter]

He has larger problems than just a cheese addiction.

[Ray Downs]

There's no larger problem than cheese addiction.