A short story about cheese
At the beginning of this I identified with the father because I too am an obsessive lover of cheese. By the end of the story, I want nothing to do with this man. Loved the transformation.
I think if I go back to work on this, I'll make Joe more sympathetic. Try to see how much sympathy I can draw out of a snapshot situation like this.
Cheese is the gateway to sympathy
lol I came here to say the same
Give Joe a chance.
You're a genius. Nothing else to add.
PS: No parmesan on the marinara. That's a rule. :)
Thanks! Even though you're wrong about no parm on red. Is that a thing?
it's probably worse than having a cappuccino in the afternoon.
Even iced?
At normal Italian cafes you'd have iced coffee, not iced cappuccino. Maybe at Starbucks you can have something like that.
Just gonna go ahead and say it: Joe is my hero. NOW WHERE'S MY PEPPER
Real ones know.
This is sad.
I was trying to be kinda funny!
He has larger problems than just a cheese addiction.
There's no larger problem than cheese addiction.
At the beginning of this I identified with the father because I too am an obsessive lover of cheese. By the end of the story, I want nothing to do with this man. Loved the transformation.
I think if I go back to work on this, I'll make Joe more sympathetic. Try to see how much sympathy I can draw out of a snapshot situation like this.
Cheese is the gateway to sympathy
lol I came here to say the same
Give Joe a chance.
You're a genius. Nothing else to add.
PS: No parmesan on the marinara. That's a rule. :)
Thanks! Even though you're wrong about no parm on red. Is that a thing?
it's probably worse than having a cappuccino in the afternoon.
Even iced?
At normal Italian cafes you'd have iced coffee, not iced cappuccino. Maybe at Starbucks you can have something like that.
Just gonna go ahead and say it: Joe is my hero. NOW WHERE'S MY PEPPER
Real ones know.
This is sad.
I was trying to be kinda funny!
He has larger problems than just a cheese addiction.
There's no larger problem than cheese addiction.