short story: A morbidly obese man takes one last shot at love
Holy shit. Genius. The voice is powerful. Pulled me right in.
Thanks, man!
You have a gift.
Once again friend. You're a talented writer.
Thank you and thanks for reading
Goddamnit I was rooting for Wilfred to pull this off.
Such an interesting perspective so vastly different from my 5’1, 110lb girl life.
I had a more twisted idea but I wasn’t brave enough to. Maybe for another story. Thanks for reading, shortie! ;)
Was he going to suffocate Honey and kill her instead? Because that’s where I saw this going.
No, much grosser than that. But the crushing thing was where the original idea came from
Nice
This was really really good.
Thank you so much
Have you ever driven by an accident scene, where a train has run through a car?
This story was sort of like that for me.
You described the big guy so well that I was inwardly thinking. "Yep, I need more gym time. I don't want to look like him."
Honey got rich quick, with only the nightmares to come about the big guy dying on her back.
You got this story down pat, trust me.
In order, I felt disgust
Pity, and then more disgust.
Yeah, well done.
Thanks so much!
Holy shit. Genius. The voice is powerful. Pulled me right in.
Thanks, man!
You have a gift.
Once again friend. You're a talented writer.
Thank you and thanks for reading
Goddamnit I was rooting for Wilfred to pull this off.
Such an interesting perspective so vastly different from my 5’1, 110lb girl life.
I had a more twisted idea but I wasn’t brave enough to. Maybe for another story. Thanks for reading, shortie! ;)
Was he going to suffocate Honey and kill her instead? Because that’s where I saw this going.
No, much grosser than that. But the crushing thing was where the original idea came from
Nice
This was really really good.
Thank you so much
Have you ever driven by an accident scene, where a train has run through a car?
This story was sort of like that for me.
You described the big guy so well that I was inwardly thinking. "Yep, I need more gym time. I don't want to look like him."
Honey got rich quick, with only the nightmares to come about the big guy dying on her back.
You got this story down pat, trust me.
In order, I felt disgust
Pity, and then more disgust.
Yeah, well done.
Thanks so much!