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What a ride! The pacing in this had me hooked, my heart rate up like a runner. I thought Edgar was a goner.

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One of my faves from you so far Ray! Wonderful and creative way to dive into the intricacies of marriage.

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Yikes, that's dark! Thanks for the shot of Friday fiction, I enjoyed it!

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And this is why I don’t run

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Shouldn’t that be, ‘don’t run and won’t get married’?

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Brutal. But worse; it was believable.

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