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Will Boucher's avatar

this is crazy good. love the intertwining of violence, classical music, and sex.

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Ray Downs's avatar

Thanks for reading. I was trying to make it fun!

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Ken W.'s avatar

The French call the orgasm the little death.

Katie's little death caused a big big death.

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Ray Downs's avatar

le petite mort etait trop bon!

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Making It Up As I Go Alone's avatar

Sex, ultraviolence, classical music - a perfect apocalypse combo. Heavy firepower, thanks.

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Ray Downs's avatar

Thank you for taking the time to read it! 🙏

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Jonathon's avatar

Your writing is awesome dude. The execution is phenomenal.

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Ray Downs's avatar

Thank you so much!

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Thomas Greenbank's avatar

Holy Crap!!! I'm glad I don't live inside your mind, it's weird enough in mine!

I mean that in the most complimentary way.

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Ray Downs's avatar

How do you know you don’t?

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