This is amazingly hilarious. I love your take on keeping a memory alive. Are you sure this is fiction and not a personal history disguised as such? Damn, one shouldn't laugh at funeral stories, but this did a good job at churning the contents of my stomach. :D
Very vulnerable of you. I’ll admit at my last funeral I spent a little too long admiring how I looked in a suit, and I don’t know if that’s better or worse.
Bro!!! I was totally sucked in.
I thought the whole thing was real!
This is amazingly hilarious. I love your take on keeping a memory alive. Are you sure this is fiction and not a personal history disguised as such? Damn, one shouldn't laugh at funeral stories, but this did a good job at churning the contents of my stomach. :D
One or two things might have really happened
Ya got me! Thanks a ton!!
Fanfuckingtastic
The last line. Excellent work!
Thank you!
Nailed it. We've all been there.
Great story. Powerful and beautifully crafted.
Thanks for reading!
This is a perfect little story based on a paradox: the narrator's act of mourning is totally authentic and totally inappropriate.
Very vulnerable of you. I’ll admit at my last funeral I spent a little too long admiring how I looked in a suit, and I don’t know if that’s better or worse.
You get me every time. Well met!
🤛
Thank you! Sure, always open.