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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Ray, this is a blockbuster movie just screaming to be made. Casting it would be the ultimate. Well done sir. - Jim

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Ray Downs's avatar

Thanks, Jim! I can see it as a French comedy. They do sex and adultery better than Hollywood.

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Jim J Wilsky's avatar

Speaking of the French and comedy. There's a clip of an old Robin Williams performance where he portrays a Frenchman smoking...I've watched at least 100 times and laughed every single time. I highly recommend it.

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Autumn Widdoes's avatar

Fantastic opening paragraphs!

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millena Nyarienga's avatar

Frank raise a smart boy but two years of lawn mowing for a pack of beer, that boy can't negotiate..

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Shoni's avatar

Super entertaining!

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Tristan Ruark's avatar

Dead. I'm dead. This is hilarious. Well done.

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